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God... I can't beleive how damn long this took me. Perhaps because I procrastinated so much or having little artistic inspiration. Whatever... I must say that this DID NOT come out nearly how I wanted it to. -__- I still have problems plotting the right spots where the light will hit and stuff. Crap... so therefore, this piece is flawed in a lot of places.

Well... I guess I should point out that some parts of its body aren't really suppposed to follow regular lighting rules. It was kind of hard to blend the color while shading it at the same time. It looks all right now... I suppose. And I still have problems shading large areas. Crap... Well... at least I'll be able to learn from this.

The lightning was kind of fun. I wanted to make it look more realistic. I dont' think I accomplished that well though. Ehh...

Overall... I suppose, it looks DECENT. I feel kind of bad since I know I probably could've done a much better job.

Well... enjoy. I'll try to keep a steady flow of deviations coming now. My artistic spirit is SLOWLY coming back to me. Yay.

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:iconthefuzz2004:
Well, at least your artistic spirit is coming back to you. I think I killed mine.

Constructive Crits:
Some parts of the wings to me should be a bit more smother since there's these bumps and stuffs and... yeah >>;
The lightning kind of looks to thick to me :/ Next time try to make it thinner. I know people are pretty much screwed when they get hit by lightning, but get hit by that lightning... it's gonna blast you to hell man @_@
I still think with fire you should use the liquify >>;
You already know about the shading, so I'll skip that...
It kind of seems that you got a bit lazy with the clouds or something... it sort of looks like a white smoke almost o.o

And... that's about it... I think... Okay, back to my RPG game...

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Siggy~
:iconchaoticblack:
You killed yours? How cruel!

XD XD XD

Well... mine basically just died on its own. Now it's just barely coming back from the dead.

Now err... anyway, thank you for teh decent comment! Everytime I receive comments like:

Cool XD

dat r0x0rz my b0x0rz!!!!!!

ect, I feel like I want to scream.

RPG game? Which one?

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:iconthefuzz2004:
Ugh, I don't like comments like that...
Ones that say something like,"I like the pose, and I also like this that yada yada yada..." I don't mind but I prefer crits o.o

Eh, Pokemon Crater. I decided to try this thing out...

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW SLOW IT IS...
Even with high speed internet it takes forever to load one page... and it's very confusing... all the attacks that aren't supposed to cause damage cause damage and it's just confusing me X_x;
And I found a fire type pokemon in the water.
How messed up is that?
But at least I got most of my favorite Pokemon off it (God, Eevees are everywhere... and so are the starter pokemon)

I guess it's an okay RPG when your bored and waiting for long updates, but I don't really like it...

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Siggy~
:iconchaoticblack:
I like comments that are thorough and shit. :) Comments that the user took some time to say.

I'm currently playing Star Fox and Diddy Kong Racing. :rofl:

A fire pokemon in the water?! Weird...

I guess I can work on my custom wall paper now. Do you mind if I use some of your pictures for it?

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:iconthefuzz2004:
Diddy Kong Racing... What the-

Yeah, go ahead... use some pictures... I could really care less @_@

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Siggy~
:iconlightbeyonddarkness:
My artistic spirit is always with me BUT unfortunately... The creator of exams ate it oO I think they'll spit it back out in September, yaay

Now for teh critique @_@
1. Lightning kinda funny... peraps you could make it tinner o0;;
2. Needs more shading... use black xD
3. ...and highlighting. do you use the smudge tool? It's lyke my savior :o

Praises, yaay :D
1. Are those things in the sky clouds? They look like fog, but I still like it o_o
2. I like the character design =D
3. Well actually... the colors are kinda pretty @.@

:XD:

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:iconmarychain:
that is badass awesome- possibly your best yet!

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Batman: "A sound observation, Robin."
:iconchaoticblack:
Ahh... I hope they give your spirit back to you soon. ^^

Thanks for the comments and stuff. And I'll try to remember your tips for my next pic. :)

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:iconchaoticblack:
hahaha! Thanks! I'll try to continue with my art and so and so on.

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